Rubric - High School

Overview
The Rubrics section contains a description of the criteria required for a paper to earn a particular score point for each of the scoring domains: Composing/Written Expression and Usage/Mechanics. These criteria are used to score all of the papers. You should become familiar with the description of each score point for the three domains. Study them in conjunction with the anchor papers to gain a full understanding of how the criteria are applied. All domains are assessed on a scale from 1 to 4.

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Composing/Written Expression
The Composing/Written/Expression domain includes the focusing, elaborating, and structuring that a writer does to clarify and defend a clear position for a reader. It is the creation of a product, the building of a writing intended to be read. The writer crafts his/her message for the reader by focusing on a clear position, providing elaboration, organizing ideas in a unified, logical manner. This crafting of a finished product also results from a shaping and controlling of language to affect readers. This is accomplished through the vividness, specificity, and rhythm of the piece and through the writer’s attitude and presence.

  Features:

  • Position
  • Elaboration
  • Organization and Unity
  • Sentence variety
  • Selected vocabulary and information
  • Tone and Voice

Composing/Written Expression Rubric

Score Point
4
The writer demonstrates consistent, though not necessarily perfect, control of the Composing/Written Expression domain's features.

The writing at this score point level:

  • Focuses on a clear position and adapts content to audience, purpose, and situation.
  • Draws effective conclusions.
  • Addresses counterclaims when appropriate.
  • Contains precise and relevant evidence (examples, illustrations, reasons, events, and/or details) that suits the intended purpose and audience, clarifies and defends the writer’s position, and fully and clearly elaborates ideas.
  • Organizes ideas in a sustained and logical manner and exhibits unity by having few if any digressions, maintaining a consistent point of view, using highly effective and purposeful transitions to connect ideas within and across paragraphs, and having a strong lead and closure.
  • Develops a rhythmic flow throughout the piece that results from the purposeful variation or repetition of sentence construction for effect, the appropriate subordination of ideas, and/or the effective embedding of modifiers.
  • Contains highly specific word choice, descriptive language, and selected information that create a purposeful and appropriate tone and enhance the writer’s voice.
Score Point
3
The writer demonstrates reasonable, but not consistent, control of the Composing/Written Expression domain’s features. The writer may control some features of the domain more than others.

The writing at this score point level:

  • Focuses on a clear position and generally adapts content to audience, purpose, and situation.
  • Draws reasonable conclusions.
  • Attempts to address counterclaims when appropriate.
  • Contains relevant evidence (examples, illustrations, reasons, events, and/or details) that suits the intended purpose and audience, clarifies and defends the writer’s position, and elaborates ideas, though some thinness or unevenness in elaboration may be present.
  • Organizes ideas in a logical manner and exhibits unity by having a few minor digressions and/or shifts in point of view, using transitions to connect ideas within and across paragraphs, and having a skillful if not sophisticated lead and closure.
  • Develops a rhythmic flow throughout most of the piece that results from some variation of sentence construction, subordination of ideas, and/or embedding of modifiers.
  • Contains specific word choice, descriptive language, and selected information that create tone and enhance the writer’s voice.
Score Point
2
The writer demonstrates inconsistent control of several of the Composing/Written Expression domain's features, indicating significant weakness.

The writing at this score point level:

  • Focuses on a position, but inconsistently adapts content to audience, purpose, and situation.
  • May not draw conclusions.
  • May not address counterclaims when appropriate.
  • Contains limited evidence that suits the intended purpose and audience, clarifies or defends the writer’s position, and elaborates ideas; may be a list of general, underdeveloped statements.
  • Organizes ideas in a limited or inconsistent manner and may lack unity due to major digressions and/or shifts in point of view, limited or inconsistent use of transitions within and across paragraphs, and a weak or missing lead and/or closure.
  • Develops an uneven rhythmic flow throughout the piece as a result of a limited variation in sentence construction.
  • Exhibits inconsistent tone or voice as a result of limited word choice, descriptive language, and/or selected information.
Score Point
1
The writer demonstrates little or no control of most of the Composing/Written Expression domain's features.

The writing at this score point level:

  • Fails to focus on a position or to adapt content to audience, purpose, and situation.
  • Fails to draw conclusions.
  • Fails to address counterclaims when appropriate.
  • Contains little or no evidence that suits the intended purpose and audience or that elaborates ideas.
  • Fails to organize ideas and lacks unity as a result of major digressions and shifts in point of view, the absence of transitions connecting ideas, and no lead and/or closure.
  • Lacks a rhythmic flow as a result of little or no variation in sentence construction.
  • Lacks tone and voice as a result of little or no specific word choice, descriptive language, and/or selected information.


Usage/Mechanics
The Usage/Mechanics domain comprises the writer’s ability to form competent sentences that are appropriate for the grade level. It also comprises the use of word level features that cause written language to be acceptable and effective for standard discourse. This includes the system of symbols and cueing devices a writer uses to help readers make meaning.

  Features:

Usage/Mechanics Rubric

Score Point
4
The writer demonstrates consistent, though not necessarily perfect, control of the Usage and Mechanics domain's features.

The writing at this score point level:

  • Exhibits consistent control of sentence formation, avoiding fragments, run-ons, and comma splices.
  • Exhibits consistent control of usage, including subject/verb agreement, pronoun agreement, pronoun case, adjectives and adverbs, verb tenses, plurals and possessives, homophones, and avoidance of double negatives.
  • Exhibits consistent control of mechanics, including punctuation, capitalization, formatting, and spelling.
Score Point
3
The writer demonstrates reasonable, but not consistent, control of the Usage and Mechanics domain’s features. The writer exhibits control which outweighs occasional errors present in the paper.

The writing at this score point level:

  • Exhibits reasonable control of sentence formation, avoiding fragments, run-ons, and comma splices.
  • Exhibits reasonable control of usage, including subject/verb agreement, pronoun agreement, pronoun case, adjectives and adverbs, verb tenses, plurals and possessives, homophones, and avoidance of double negatives.
  • Exhibits reasonable control of mechanics, including punctuation, capitalization, formatting, and spelling.
Score Point
2
The writer demonstrates inconsistent control of several of the Usage and Mechanics domain’s features. Evidence of the author’s knowledge of the domain appears alongside frequent errors. The density and variety of errors outweigh the control present in the paper.

The writing at this score point level:

  • Exhibits inconsistent control of sentence formation, including occasional fragments, run-ons, and comma splices.
  • Exhibits inconsistent control of usage, including subject/verb agreement, pronoun agreement, pronoun case, adjectives and adverbs, verb tenses, plurals and possessives, homophones, and double negatives.
  • Exhibits inconsistent control of mechanics, including punctuation, capitalization, formatting, and spelling.
Score Point
1
The writer demonstrates little or no control of most of the Usage and Mechanics domain’s features. Frequent and severe errors in usage and mechanics distract the reader and may make the writing hard to understand. Even when meaning is not significantly affected, the density and variety of errors overwhelm the performance and keep it from meeting minimum standards of competence.

The writing at this score point level:

  • Exhibits little or no control of sentence formation, including fragments, run-ons, and comma splices.
  • Exhibits little or no control of usage, including subject/verb agreement, pronoun agreement, pronoun case, adjectives and adverbs, verb tenses, plurals and possessives, homophones, and double negatives.
  • Exhibits little or no control of mechanics, including punctuation, capitalization, formatting, and spelling.